Small Rivers 22 Sunday Feb 2015 Posted by gridthusto in Poetry, Writing 201 ≈ 2 Comments Tagshaiku, poetry Tears like rain; carving small rivers in the carpet, and we all float on. Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pocket (Opens in new window)Like Loading... Related
Good imagery, tears, rivers in the carpet, enough to float on. Why are you crying?
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Terrific haiku! Really like the image of floating carpet in contrast to flying carpet. 🙂
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